Seriously I have no clue what this was to start or what this has become. I also kinda ran out of ideas for the other ideas so its mostly rhyme.
Big boy Bobby,
Should have seen such sights.
This site packed a big bite such a bite wasn't even right.
Such is the struggles to make such a poem so long.
Apparently all Alex's poetry skills went out the window.
You'd think with all of the rap I listen to I'd be able to make a poem in a snap and a clap.
This poem is so bad it might just make you mad or maybe a little sad.
Seriously snap some for this isn't actually that easy as you can clearly tell.
If I read this aloud shhh some would say,
Speak up some other would say.
Alliteration, Sibilance, internal rhyme
I like your use of rhyme and the free verse feel of this. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very expressive poem. I do not think it was as rough as you thought it would be.
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