I am starting to enjoy the book more I am starting to get annoyed be the author really trying to push the idea that he is a funny guy. I like jokes every now in then but when there is basically one every paragraph it starts to really bother me. I am not exactly sure if this comes later or not but can we get a better description of this kid that junior punched in the face.
I feel that the author is spending to much time make these jokes than really showing the story. I hope that the author spices up his writing style. I really liked it at first but then it got really kind of boring to be completely honest. I know it doesn't seem like I am enjoying the book but the book itself is good but I think the mechanics of it need some work.
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