Writing Center

My trip to the writing center visit was very helpful because my writing fellow helped me clear up on things that I was confused on. We worked on clearing up repeated words for example very. The trip there led me to take out a lot of rambling and a lot of run on sentences. Although I still have a lot of things to work on I would say my paper got a lot better.
I still need to work on my transitions because I know that those are lacking and I know I also need to work on my conclusion. I struggle with conclusion because I can't tie things together in a paper or in actual conversation. It is one of my most tremendous flaws in the way of English.